Helo there, even though this is 12-month late but I think the song is actually great
I like the progression of it: It start off very groovy and scary and keep getting more and more terrifying as the track go on
The instrumental in the background is really fitting and haunting, very experimental
I also like the noise and then the loud bops at the end.
The lyricism here is also a plus, it’s very horrifying and pretty remarkable
Tho, there are some problems here:
- The mix between the background the vocal isn’t really great, most of the time the instrumental are much louder than the singing
- Why there is a 1 min silence at the end? It doesn’t add up to the song at all.
Despite that I liked the song. Really good song. Talented man
I also check your album and it’s also pretty good
Goodluck in your future career
Cheers