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I just released a single, tell me what you think!

Hello all : )

I just got my single on Spotify and would love to hear what people think!! Constructive criticism is welcome. My debut album should be out Friday, if not on Spotify on here fnkiii.bandcamp.com/

Thank you for any listens and comments! <3

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Helo there, even though this is 12-month late but I think the song is actually great
I like the progression of it: It start off very groovy and scary and keep getting more and more terrifying as the track go on
The instrumental in the background is really fitting and haunting, very experimental
I also like the noise and then the loud bops at the end.
The lyricism here is also a plus, it’s very horrifying and pretty remarkable
Tho, there are some problems here:

  • The mix between the background the vocal isn’t really great, most of the time the instrumental are much louder than the singing
  • Why there is a 1 min silence at the end? It doesn’t add up to the song at all.
    Despite that I liked the song. Really good song. Talented man
    I also check your album and it’s also pretty good
    Goodluck in your future career
    Cheers